Post by Pyre on Sept 10, 2009 16:22:39 GMT -8
Other Characters: Flamedance
Canon Character? No
Name:
Gender: Female
Age: 7 moons
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Apprentice
Short Appearance: small silver she-cat with a blush underbelly;striking blue eyes.
Appearance:
Likes/Strengths: Hunting, Kits
Dislikes/Weaknesses: talking to others, fighting
Personality:
One-Sentence Personality:
History:
Summary:
Best Friends: None
Parents:River-rush, Icenose
Siblings: Whitekit, Silverkit
Mentor: unknown
Apprentice:none
Other:nope
Cousins: none
Other Relations:none
Other: umm nope
RolePlaying Sample:
*THE FIELDS AFTER THIS ARE FIELDS SPECIFIC ONLY TO A CERTAIN RANK*
leader (first field is also applicable for deputy)--
Why Chosen For Deputy: I want an in depth explanation as to why you think this cat was chosen for deputy. Look up history if it's a canon cat. If nothing is said on the history, just make up the reason depending on the cat's personality
Received Nine Lives From: If you don't know some of the names, you may make them up
medicine cat/apprentice--
Sign from StarClan: What told the previous medicine cat this cat was right for medicine cat? If it's a canon cat and there's no solution, just make it up
Medicine Cat Skills: Are they good at memorizing herbs? Are they wise? What makes them suitable for medicine cat position?
Canon Character? No
Name:
Hailpaw
Gender: Female
Age: 7 moons
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Apprentice
Short Appearance: small silver she-cat with a blush underbelly;striking blue eyes.
Appearance:
||Build||
Hailpaw has a very small build she is slender, looking almost a little too skinny. Her frame is made mainly for speed and has some muscle under her pelt. Her legs are a good size making her about the same height as other apprentices but her legs are rather thin like, with some swimming muscle built onto them. Her bodice is the most noticeable on her, as it sticks out slightly, with a very feminine look to it.
||Pelt||
Her pelt consists of mainly three colors: silver, white, and blush brown. Her head including ears and part of her face, stretching out along her back, and up her tail are all a pretty silver color. Her sides, part of her frontal face and inner legs are a soft white color. And her underbelly and a bit of her tail are a pretty pinkish brown color almost a tanish color. Her fur is rather short and sticks to her frame rather well, and helps to show what curves she has on her body. The fur that makes up her muzzle is whiteish and breaks off into the blush brown. The back of her neck is her silver color.
||Eyes||
Hailpaw has striking blue eyes. Ones that almost reflect a icy tint to it. It is pale and yet darkens around the center of her eye near the pupil. There is a nice glow about it that leaves others melting at the sight of them. They have specks of lighter and darker colors swimming in there depths. Making her eyes captivating and cool.
||Face||
Hailpaw has a rather pretty face, her jaw line is perfectly chiseled ,pointing into a small angle. The part of her face near the eyes and mouth is a white color while her cheeks are a pretty silver color attaching to the color that runs down the back of her neck. Her nose is a pretty pink color, with white whiskers that sprout from her cheeks and flow to the tips of her shoulder blades. Her ears are at a perfect point with an almond shape.
Likes/Strengths: Hunting, Kits
Dislikes/Weaknesses: talking to others, fighting
Personality:
Timid>> Hailpaw is a really timid she-cat she finds most other cats intimidating and often will try to hide herself from their gaze. She is not too good at flirting and when other toms try to flirt she often hides her face from them and blushes like mad. She usually likes to keep to herself because of that, and sometimes gets teased for being so scared. She's not good with being all that social with other cats even in her own Clan. She usually gets so timid she starts stuttering when shes spoken to and then runs away. Always on the move is what she seems to be.
Loyal>>She is very loyal to her Clan and can't imagine ever leaving ThunderClan. She likes to try and keep to her own Clan, but will talk to those in other Clans. That's if she can manage speaking a single word to them. She never really gets to close to any other cat that did not belong to ThunderClan. Which she likes better anyways, so that way shes not to attached to any of them.
Sweet && bouncy>> Once you break into her outer shell, she can be very sweet. She'll really like being around you and for once wont get tongue tied! She would, however use you as a shield from others, but would love you to death for it in the end. She is a good listener and likes to listen to her friends talk, it soothes her in some ways. Only then will she release her more wild side and be playful and bouncy. Play fighting is a natural instinct for her and her friends, but the second someone else try to talk to her she hides her face.
Clumsy>>Being the timid cat she is you can imagine that shes rather clumsy. She often trips over herself when surprised and is hard for her to walk without tripping on someone or something. She often embarrasses herself when shes trying to run away ,and then trips over something. Even when shes trying to look cool in front of someone she'll always somehow manage to trip and fall on her face.
One-Sentence Personality:
To some her up in two words: Timid and Clumsy, she is a skittish she-cat that has a hard time leaving her protective shell.
History:
Kithood>> She was born on a bright day in new leaf. From her mother River-rush, a pretty silver she-cat with blue eyes. Her father Icenose a large white tom cat with green eyes. She was born in a litter of three but her other two siblings dubbed Silverkit and Whitekit were born still born. Because of her pelt color and striking blue eyes, she was named Hailkit.
Being the only kit she was sheltered by her mother, and she loved it. She felt safe and protected while her mother played with her and took care of her. But because of her lack of socialism she was very timid with others and often hid behind her mother when other kits wanted to play with her. Her father sadly died on her fifth moon and she grieved with her mother, both of them keeping each other company.
Apprenticeship>> At the age of six moons, like other kits her age were made into apprentices. She was given her name Hailpaw. Her mother was so proud of her and she still, even though no longer considered a kit spent time with her mother. They often went out on hunts together and spent time out in the forest. One bad day in leaf bare her mother caught a case of green cough. She was told her mother had a strong chance of recovering and so she had high hopes that her mother would join her back in the territory again.
But in the end she could not fight the sickness and her mother died. Hailpaw, alone and timid as ever stuck to herself, even when others tried to help her. She often just made an excuse to leave and ran off. Making her scared to get close to anyone ever again because they might leave her. Having a small case of abandonment issues she became even more shy and built up a hard shell around herself to shield herself from socializing. Getting teased from some of the other apprentices she spent some time alone. Just letting them call her names like loner, puny, and scardy cat. Of course having a few friends often brightened her days.
Summary:
As you can see Hailpaw is a really timid cat, right from the start. And other major events caused her to clam up around everyone. She developed abandonment issues and is afraid to get close to anyone always having that feeling in the pit of her stomach that they will just disappear.
Best Friends: None
Parents:
Siblings:
Mentor: unknown
Apprentice:none
Other:nope
Cousins: none
Other Relations:none
Other: umm nope
RolePlaying Sample:
Her silver pelt glinted like a fish in the water, as the apprentice peered into the sparkling waters of the stream in the territory. Her bright blue pools reflected back at her through the surface. Hailpaw sighed, closing her lids to take in the serenity of the evening, she was finally alone. No training today, where she had to try really hard just not to trip. Here she could be herself and if she did in fact trip, no one was here to watch her.
Opening her eye lids she turned, walking away to sit on the more soft grassy area. Her almond shaped ears flicked at the soft sounds of ThunderClan terrain. The fluttering of birds overhead caught her attention and she lifted her chin toward the sky. The skinny feline huddled into a tight ball letting her gaze fall onto the ground as she snuggled up against herself. Her eyes closed and she started to let sleep take over her.
Yow! a yell echoed through the territory and the silver colored she-cat jumped. Her eyes alert completely and stopped to look around. Turning she didn't see anyone, and backed up a bit. Her tail swished side to side as she scented the air multiple times to check for intruders. When no scent came into her glands she breathed a sigh of relief. Her blush colored underbelly showed brightly as she walked into a patch of light. She walked slowly toward the owner of that yell.
Her steps were moved carefully as she moved, her body dipped in a smaller elevation of ground, and she came back up. Stopping once she glanced around, and continued. Her striking blue pools darted to each sound as she pushed her way through some undergrowth. Careful to watch for some dips, seeing as that particular moment she didn't pay attention she would fall into one. So her eyes alert for them she glanced over. Her paws slipped, but she scrambled back wards in time not to fall.
Of course like she had thought, she almost fell in. The sound of slow paw steps made her lift her head and she spotted a tom cat walking away. A few cuts an scratches were seen on his back, and her eyes widened. Moving slowly around the brambles, she trotted on as left the prickly bush behind her. Her small frame weaved through the bits of the territory and she came to the Clan entrance. Padding in surprisingly cautious, she turned to see him walking toward Spottedleaf's den.
He spoke something and the female poked her head out. She disappeared for a moment and came out with some herb. She seemed to be looking for where the scratches were, and she lowered her head. She wanted to help but really, she was to afraid to ask. Be brave.... she told herself and slowly walked toward them. Her head lowered the whole way as she looked at them through her lids. Ok...ok... almost there... breathe...breathe. she suddenly turned and found herself walking away. When she had be only a few fox lengths away a moment before.
She stopped, her eyes tightly shut. Your such a coward! she told herself, and her body started to tremble a bit. Opening her eyes she peered around anxiously, hoping that none of the other apprentices were watching her. Ready to mock her when she went to sleep. When no one was in sight, she sighed. Lifting her head she blushed softly. They were probably watching her right now, trembling like some stupid kit. She turned around quickly, her eyes wide as she stared at them. "I....I....i ummm." she stuttered and closed her eyes tightly together again.
Say something! her mind demanded and she opened her eyes again. "Do you need any help!" she blurted out. She was surprised that the words that came out actually made some sense. She blushed again and took a step back. "I...uh mean if you need it that is. I.." she babbled and shook her head. "I think ill leave now!" she shouted and hadn't realized that she was trembling again and turned to run. Your so stupid! You can't even talk to your own clan mates without tripping over your words! she thought angrily.
*THE FIELDS AFTER THIS ARE FIELDS SPECIFIC ONLY TO A CERTAIN RANK*
Why Chosen For Deputy: I want an in depth explanation as to why you think this cat was chosen for deputy. Look up history if it's a canon cat. If nothing is said on the history, just make up the reason depending on the cat's personality
Received Nine Lives From: If you don't know some of the names, you may make them up
medicine cat/apprentice--
Sign from StarClan: What told the previous medicine cat this cat was right for medicine cat? If it's a canon cat and there's no solution, just make it up
Medicine Cat Skills: Are they good at memorizing herbs? Are they wise? What makes them suitable for medicine cat position?
